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What Kinds of Words? redux

Posted on Feb 6th, 2009 by Laura : foxfire Laura
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What kinds of words might the kudzu whisper to the magnolia branches as it overtakes them?

 I imagine them to be syllables of consolation and care, spoken with tenderness despite the encroachment of vine over pod. Inexorability curls around each phrase in a drawl, slowed so that the emerging noises sound like a record played at the wrong speed, lulling branches and blossoms into acquiescence.

How long does it take for rust to darken into this bloody burnt sienna?

No one can tell. The flakes defy any sort of analysis and resist being studied with the tenacious insubstantiality of snowdrops hurrying into dirt when flurries fall and the earth is too warm for them to stick.

When will this well run dry? And when it does, what will you do for drinking?

Its water, like the backside of that old barrel I found down in the ravine last fall, has been rusty for some time now, and there's no telling what will happen next. I can't say but I had a dream the other night about a tall machine, like a crane or a giraffe, lanky with angles of metal that reach up to the sky when they should somehow be digging. When I woke I felt taller for a moment, and also deeper, as if the soles of my feet had met up with some spilled honey or errant tar while I walked in my sleep.

Whose face do you see in the moon?

Last time I looked, it was a bitter old man, in love with rocks, who collected them in heaps and hid them behind big sheets of glass for no one to hold and touch. That glass is cracked and clamped together now with big metal pincers and I see stick figures of men running in the stacks of marble alongside the buildings where the rocks wait for someone to see them, know them, hold them, collect them, love them.

How do you know what those rocks need?

I can't say but I had a feeling last time I was with them that they were lonely, that their coldness belied an ache for touch, a stony pulse that no scope can find. Of course, I could be wrong.

What kind of birds are those in the big white oak down by the train tracks?

They don't resemble any other birds I've ever seen. Their feathers almost glow with greenness and they sound like killdeers do at dusk, but they don't play games in the grass to keep things safe at home.  There are four of them and they share branches with six or seven crows in peace, the bigger darker birds still and silent like silhouettes in a shadow box.

How do you know what to gamble on?

No one can say for sure. It might be numbers, taken from some pool of pattern we all dip into when we need to quantify or guess. It could be weather: the blessing of rain in lakes, the welcome screen of snow on grass in early morning, the return of warmth. Or it could be something else entirely: a roll of the dice into the grace of shadow and the diminishment of wealth. Smallness, a challenge and a psalm, dealt out like manna or a sacrament as things fall apart and the center splinters into pieces of itself in places we can't reach or see. Loss, a subtraction resisted at first but then embraced and even loved.

When will we know when to quit?

When the smoke turns colors we don't see now. When cities percolate with the sounds of moving feet, not rushing but ambling, sharing the roads with the fed travelers who once sat hungry and alone on crowded hillsides. A multitude, at peace and heading towards some common space of work and gentle effort, a tribe finally able to claim its sustaining voice in the spaces where the words once slept.


laura sorrells
summer 07, Feb. 09
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maze : ordinary
about 15 hours later
maze said

hmmm…now you’ve got me pondering these things.

doolang : Unity
about 16 hours later
doolang said

when the sleeping words awake

good morning

Laura : foxfire
about 19 hours later
Laura said

mornin”

synonym for light : pliable provocateur
1 day later
synonym for light said

oh laura!!!    beautiful!!    I have the sparrow quartet singing in my ears as I read this and I am overwhelmed. 

wow.  I’m so glad to have read this.  it’s, I think it’s my favorite of all your posts so far.  I probably could say that everyday, but today this is my favorite. 

Laura : foxfire
1 day later
Laura said

ah yes, Abigail Washburn. I keep meaning to get that but I have kind of stopped buying music for awhile.
 
I am so glad you enjoyed this. Maze had been prodding me a bit about not writing poetry and that kind of spurred this revisit to something I’d written in 07. I had fun with it, and it feels good to know that the poetic thing, whatever it is, isn’t just gone from me, you know?

Annisa : unbounded love
2 days later
Annisa said

Poetry doesn’t leave us, Laura.  It’s a part of our souls.  We just have to go to that place in our hearts where we smell the fresh cut hay or feel the dawn slowly crawl over us to find it and then allow it to take us on a journey. 
 
I’ve also been finding that difficult lately and I’m in the process of asking myself why.
 
And did I mention that I really enjoyed this post? :-)

Laura : foxfire
2 days later
Laura said

Thank you, Annisa. I so appreciate that. It’s easy for me to let the presence of spirit poetry needs from me to get stuck in the midst of the daily stuff of moving life along. I want to let it be still more often. and it does feel like a part of my soul, just as it is clearly a part of yours, too. : )

synonym for light : pliable provocateur
2 days later
synonym for light said

When the smoke turns colors we don’t see now. When cities percolate
with the sounds of moving feet, not rushing but ambling, sharing the
roads with the fed travelers who once sat hungry and alone on crowded
hillsides. A multitude, at peace and heading towards some common space
of work and gentle effort, a tribe finally able to claim its sustaining
voice in the spaces where the words once slept.

:-)


I do know Laura.  I do know.  and I agree with Annisa that it never goes, sometimes it might play a little hide and seek though.  ;-)

Laura : foxfire
2 days later
Laura said

Hide and seek is all right with me. makes me grateful. thank you, Dawn.

Donny : (*  *)
2 days later
Donny said

wow.

Laura : foxfire
2 days later
Laura said

speaking of mystery. : )

Centria : Full Moon
2 days later
Centria said

this is amazing. 
What kinds of words might the kudzu whisper to the magnolia branches as it overtakes them?
My heart leapt to consider this….
Laura, you offer us such treasures. 
You’re giving me ideas, you know!

Laura : foxfire
3 days later
Laura said

Thanks, Kathy! I used to write much more poetry and prose poems and such than I have for the past year. I really want to dig back into it. I’m glad to be giving you ideas. let me know where they take you, please!

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